Love Burned, She Rose Unscathed

"Valery..." The young girl was a bit at a loss.

"Why are you looking at me? Do you even know the procedures for financial verification? What if something goes wrong, and we let just any Tom, Dick, or Harry in here? Can you shoulder that responsibility?" "I... I sort of know the procedure. They covered it in training. If, after the verification, Ms. Cole's black card checks out, then the responsibility isn't on me..."

"Heh, haven't been on the job long, but you're a quick learner. Just a heads-up, though, working in our line of business requires a good eye. Knowing who our target clients are, who can afford it, and who can't, is essential; otherwise, it's just a waste of time."

The young girl said, "Thanks, Valery. But I'm still new, haven't made any sales yet. I'm in the learning phase, willing to observe and practice, not afraid of wasting time."

Finished speaking, she turned to Roseanne and said, "Ma'am, according to our standard procedure, we'll need to verify your card. If there are no issues, we can proceed to view the property."

Then she told Norris and Madge, "Please, have a seat over here. Have some coffee; it won't take long."

Norris waved his hands hurriedly, "Oh, no need, you're too kind."

His heart was racing. Anne was actually going through with this?

Once the card was checked, the gig would be up.

Better to bail now, right? A touch of embarrassment is better than a full-on drama, yeah?

Madge was calmer than Norris, at least on the surface. She sat down, deliberately taking a sip of her coffee.

Only... her hand was shaking as she held the cup.

"Right this way, ma'am"

and followed into

see how long you can keep up this act!

...

Ten minutes later-

emerged from

waiting at

her as if she weren't

The young girl looked anxiously at

"Yes."

a better sense of the place and the surroundings before you make a

"But..."

right?! We're talking about a property worth

still putting on

The woman burst

"Odette, now you

is like? Fresh

you've got so much to learn! Take

eyes peeled in

Ugh!

be misunderstanding something here," Odette was

punch above their weight, dragging you into

spoke, her eyes

Valery, Ms. Cole's