The Primal Hunter

”So, how exactly does this evaluation work? I would assume all of the submissions have already been evaluated upon submission,” Jake asked. “And even if they hadn’t, I doubt doing so would take you much time.”

“Indeed, each evaluation has already been completed. However, this final part is a bit different. This evaluation is not for anyone’s benefit, but your own,” the Architect answered. “Part of the purpose of this Challenge Dungeon is to benefit you, after all. Tell me, have you noticed something different about this House of the Architect compared to where you usually work?”

“A lot of things, considering it’s a Challenge Dungeon inside a World Wonder,” Jake responded in a rather deadpan tone. “Unless you expected me to notice something specific?”

The Architect sighed. “The environment. With your senses, you should have noticed a slight difference. Tell me, how would you evaluate your gains during your time spent here?”

“I felt like I made a lot of progress?” Jake semi-asked. “More than usual, but there can be many explanations for that… one of which is that the environment is actively helping somehow. But it isn’t like it’s anything extreme.”

“To you, perhaps it didn’t feel like it helped much, but to others, it is far more extreme,” the Architect said before elaborating further. “The environment in which you are crafting is incredibly impactful on what you can make, and the House of the Architect is filled with the Records of C-grade crafters throughout the eras. The effect was weaker for you compared to many others as you already do many things at a high level, but it will help uplift the Records of many of those who are struggling, allowing them to accomplish new feats they thought impossible.”

Jake frowned a bit at the explanation as a thought occurred. “Does that mean I make better things when I craft at the Order of the Malefic Viper compared to at my lodge back on Earth?”

“No, the differences in Records between those two places simply aren’t enough. They aren’t focused enough. Also, the environment itself wasn’t designed by a higher being to support crafting, and even if the Viper wished to do it, it would inadvertently come at the cost of weakening other forms of Records. In fact, places like this are nearly exclusively found at Challenge Dungeons or very unique locales, such as World Wonders,” Nevermore explained.

“Huh,” Jake let out, guessing that the Challenge Dungeon he had done when he first got his profession probably also counted.

“Are all the Challenge Dungeons in Nevermore like this?” Jake questioned, remembering when Nevermore first mentioned that one of the reasons why Challenge Dungeons didn’t give levels was to improve Records. Maybe every single Challenge Dungeon was also designed with special Records there in mind.

“In some aspects, yes, but it varies dependent on the era and the Challenge Dungeons in question. The Challenge Dungeons are ultimately evaluations for a grander achievement, and that is their primary design above all else.”

Jake nodded as he moved along the conversation. “So what does it mean when you say this evaluation is to my benefit?”

“Rather than simply give you an achievement and throw you out, we will go through your submissions and you will receive feedback. However, only the feedback you ask for yourself, outside of some very broad conclusions,” the Architect explained. “I will also give you a general oversight as to how good each submission is if that is something you want.”

“Damn, feels almost weird being told I won’t just be thrown out of the room for asking one question too many,” Jake smiled.

“That can still be arranged if you want,” Nevermore responded in what Jake really hoped was a joking tone. “I do have some leeway, after all. This part isn’t anything the system demands but merely an extra reward, so to say.”

“But there will still be a real reward after, right?” Jake said, trying to change the subject.

“That we will discuss later… for now, let us proceed with your submissions, starting with your first one,” the Architect said. “So, any questions regarding the submission of our first meeting?”

I an idiot for deciding to

first submission had been made entirely on impulse, and after over two years in the House, Jake felt more uncertain than ever if

question is far from straightforward, as in order to provide a satisfactory conclusion, I would need to know what you would have submitted instead,” Nevermore answered, and honestly, she had a good point. “However, I will say that the submission didn’t drag

“Now for my other submissions... I am not sure it’s worth it to go super into detail about all of them,

curse-related properties, but the

the prior two, where it is different but not outstanding on its own. It did help these two that you managed to upgrade your Sense of the Malefic Viper during their creation process, but the impact wasn’t extreme. Finally, we have the Adaptable Arcane Acid of Brittleness, which admittedly is the best of these four, but from a pure quality standpoint, it simply isn’t that impressive. The fact that this was your first time crafting an acid and the uniqueness of your arcane

latter three not with the intent to make great submissions but because they were in fields he wanted to work on anyway. He was a bit surprised the Architect hadn’t tossed his final poison in there, which was a pleasant surprise. Jake also felt oddly happy that Temlat wasn’t mentioned in this batch, showing his Path hadn’t been one of the things the Architect evaluated

the word relative a lot,” Jake pointed

peak of others or below average for a third person. When Creations are also put into the context of their crafting journey

crafter he knew as a face instantly appeared. “Arnold, that weird guy. He must have done well in

her head. “Now, did you have any questions or

any I think you will answer,” Jake

half of his submitted Creations, just leaving the Blackheart Poison, Unseen Arcane Hunter skill upgrade, weird

let us proceed,” the Architect said. “With the remaining five, how do you

you spot this narrative on Amazon, know that

from worst

to everything else you have submitted, so if a particular Creation is too close in nature to

fully aware

Records of the Malefic Viper that has been mixed in. Moreover, as a

wondering if maybe

If you had done that, it would have been batched in with the other mediocre submissions,” the Architect shook her

to have even gotten a straight answer. “I don’t really have any other

This is once more a skill of impressive quality, and the upgrade was most certainly substantial and integrated many new concepts, but its evaluation is harmed primarily due to two things. First of all the fact it relied on many prior insights and ideas. Simply upgrading the skill a few rarities wasn’t too difficult, and while what you accomplished was a feat, it was primarily forced through due to your Bloodline and, quite frankly, ridiculously high Perception stat for someone who is barely mid-tier C-grade,” the Architect said, Jake only taking the last part

been mentioned yet, but Jake only saw that

the Architect

off with her evaluation, making Jake doubt something he had done, it could hurt upgrades in the future. Her clear attempt to not mention anything negative about the details of the Creations themselves

slight pause. “With these last three submissions, it is a bit difficult to separate them in terms of the value of their evaluations, so I would deem it best to not do so. The Grimoire, Perennial Arcane Marble, and the Path of your student Temlat are all unique and stand tall on their own. So, rather than simply saying which one is best, I will explain the

the feeling Nevermore was partly doing it like this for his sake, as he kind of felt scummy having to think about Temlat’s life and Path just being reduced to

it your

in such an overwhelming fashion, the impact it has on all your other Creations that utilize your Bloodline or arcane affinity is not to be underestimated. I can say that if you had only submitted a single Creation within this Challenge Dungeon, this one would have been the best by far out of

the marble as he got an idea. Hiding a mischievous smile, he asked: “So, I have been wondering… can you give me a more in-depth review of

him before sighing. “Truthfully, I would be more than happy to do that, but I am unable to. This isn’t simply me withholding information but a system-imposed rule specifically regarding Bloodlines and Transcendent skills. Nothing can be shared with anyone, not even the ones who