Chapter 0488

Enzo

The clatter of hockey sticks and the distinct screech of skates cutting into the ice enveloped me as Tim and I entered the arena. It was a different vibe than what I was used to back in Mountainview-less polished, maybe a little rougher around the edges-but it was hockey, and that was home enough for me.

"As you can see, we're already underway," Tim said, gesturing toward the scrimmage taking place below us. "But I'd like to hear your first impressions. And don't hold back."

We found a decent spot to watch from and settled in. For several minutes, I just observed. The team had heart; that much was evident to me. But they also displayed glaring inadequacies.

Their passes were always just a little too long or a little too short, shots were mistimed, and their defensive formation looked more like a scattering of bodies rather than a cohesive unit. It was immediately clear that they had little chemistry on the ice, unlike my team. But it was fixable.

Tim leaned toward me, his eyes fixed on the game but clearly attuned to my reaction. "So, what do you think? Any initial thoughts?"

is inconsistent, they're either overshooting or hesitating. That's something we'd need to drill in practice. Also, defensively, they're reacting rather than anticipating the play. It's costing them valuable seconds, and in hockey, that's

his face showing no trace of defensiveness, only an open willingness to listen and learn. "I see. Anything

noticed some of them are skating

"I hear you, Enzo. But unfortunately, equipment is a difficult issue. Funding's always been tight.

hit the ground running. Teams shouldn't be waiting around for random sponsorships or

"You're already thinking about

casting another look at the players who still seemed like strangers sharing the ice rather than

smile, one that crinkled the comers of his

to the team,

pocket. "Sorry," he said with a sigh as he stood, "I've got to take this. Why don't you keep watching? Get a feel

before returning my attention to the scrimmage. Already, the gears were turning in my head as to how this team could improve-and how I could be at the helm, guiding them toward the potential I

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